My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Friday, 21 June 2019
Thursday, 20 June 2019
Wednesday, 19 June 2019
Thursday, 13 June 2019
Blog Commenting
WALT: We are learning to write a quality blog comment.
Reflection: I found it really hard to come up with a quality comment. But I think this is a quality comment because it has positive helpful and a connection
Reflection: I found it really hard to come up with a quality comment. But I think this is a quality comment because it has positive helpful and a connection
Thursday, 30 May 2019
Whatuwhiwhi Thank You Letter
Dear Isabel
Thank you for taking us to Whatuwhiwhi, teaching us about marine reserves and letting us experience life under water.
My friend Izaak and I were racing but he cheated and pulled me behind him.
Once again thank for letting us experience marine life.
Heading back to shore the highlight of my day was seeing triple fins and spotties.
Thank you for taking us to Whatuwhiwhi, teaching us about marine reserves and letting us experience life under water.
My friend Izaak and I were racing but he cheated and pulled me behind him.
Once again thank for letting us experience marine life.
Heading back to shore the highlight of my day was seeing triple fins and spotties.
Friday, 17 May 2019
Up Skilling Sentence
WALT: We are learning to write quality sentences.
The house stood in the woods.
On a wet winter the shifty old house stood crookedly in the rickety damp woods while the owner was chopping wood.
Reflection: I could make it more quality by choosing better words.
The house stood in the woods.
On a wet winter the shifty old house stood crookedly in the rickety damp woods while the owner was chopping wood.
Reflection: I could make it more quality by choosing better words.
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