Moment in life
As soon as we landed in the water my heart was racing. Every turn we took I thought we were going drown. After a while it was actually very exciting , even jumping over the waves. The beaming breeze was making my face numb. My shoes were soaking. The salt in my mouth was disgusting, I try to spit it out but the taste just stood there. Beep beep beep, the machine was lifting up the boat. I was very disappointed. I ask if we could have another turn but sadly we were not allowed.
Darius
That was very interesting and scary
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Deletegood job keep it up
ReplyDeleteI would say so my self
Deleteyou did awesome. all you need to do is check back on your spelling and find just all the spelling mistakes but apart from that you (truly) did great
ReplyDeleteI love your work Darius.
ReplyDeleteI love the part when it said beep beep beep
ReplyDeletegood job Darius.
Hey Darius. My favourite part was when the machine went beep beep beep.
ReplyDeleteBy the way make sure you check you stories to make sure they make sense.
Great story though