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Wednesday 28 November 2018

Camping At Whatuwhiwhi

Camp Writing

 We were walking to the beach to go for a swim. But instead or going for a swim we walked through a dark cave. The water got deeper and deeper and darker until we came out the other the side. After that we jumped of a rocky cliff. It was so fun because I did the “silly salmon” off the cliff twice. On my third turn I did the pin. I went so deep that I felt rocks under my feet. After diving my whole class ate kina they were so delicious! I walked back to the whare with my friend Damon. The sand was so warm I just wanted to sleep on it, but the rocks really hurt mine and Damon's feet.

Monday 5 November 2018

Hydroponic Writing

WALT: We are learning to design and create a hydroponic system.

What was your favourite part?
 Using the hot glue gun because I’ve never used a hot glue gun.

 What I could have done differently:
 I could have used more plants because I only have one plant.

What I found difficult:
 What I found difficult was making my prototype because I burnt myself three times.

What I could have done better:
I should have more plants but my prototype is to small.


Do you do hydroponics? What have you done?

Sumo Masters V.S Boxer Harlen.

WALT: We are learning to right scary stories.

Sumo Masters V.S Boxer Harlen

 Sumo Masters was a guy who loved fighting and also loved Macas. Boxer Harlen also loved fighting but he hated macas he liked vegetables instead. Sumo Masters and Boxer Harlen were best friends, until one terrible day when they had to fight each other! “I’m going to waste you” said Boxer Harlen. “ Not even” yelled Sumo Masters. “yeah I am!” replied Boxer Harlen. “ You’re so fat and chubby that you can’t even see your feet!”. “Well...well”. Stumbled Sumo Masters. “ That’s what I thought”, said Boxer Harlen, in a mean way. “Whatever” whispered Sumo Masters. “What did you say?” said Boxer Harlen. “I said whatever” replied Sumo Masters. Boxer Harlen went to punch him but instead his fist rebounded off Sumo Masters’ belly and he punched himself. He was so strong he knocked himself out! “Ha Ha, told you, you can’t beat me.” Yelped Sumo Masters. Sumo Masters walked out of Boxer Harlens house like he was positive he was always going to win. Before he left he grabbed some Macas before the fight tomorrow. At the fight Boxer Harlen tried so hard to beat up Sumo Masters but he kept on punching himself. So Sumo Masters WON! By Darius 

By Darius

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