Sumo Masters V.S Boxer Harlen.

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Sumo Masters V.S Boxer Harlen

 Sumo Masters was a guy who loved fighting and also loved Macas. Boxer Harlen also loved fighting but he hated macas he liked vegetables instead. Sumo Masters and Boxer Harlen were best friends, until one terrible day when they had to fight each other! “I’m going to waste you” said Boxer Harlen. “ Not even” yelled Sumo Masters. “yeah I am!” replied Boxer Harlen. “ You’re so fat and chubby that you can’t even see your feet!”. “Well...well”. Stumbled Sumo Masters. “ That’s what I thought”, said Boxer Harlen, in a mean way. “Whatever” whispered Sumo Masters. “What did you say?” said Boxer Harlen. “I said whatever” replied Sumo Masters. Boxer Harlen went to punch him but instead his fist rebounded off Sumo Masters’ belly and he punched himself. He was so strong he knocked himself out! “Ha Ha, told you, you can’t beat me.” Yelped Sumo Masters. Sumo Masters walked out of Boxer Harlens house like he was positive he was always going to win. Before he left he grabbed some Macas before the fight tomorrow. At the fight Boxer Harlen tried so hard to beat up Sumo Masters but he kept on punching himself. So Sumo Masters WON! By Darius 

By Darius

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